Friday, April 16, 2021

The Power - Naomi Alderman (2016)

Several friends recommended this book to me several years ago, and perhaps it took me this long because I am not generally fascinated by the fantasy genre. Yet few can call The Power a work of genre fiction. Or perhaps it is genre fiction and it is simply a stand-out novel that went mainstream. But it was written with support from the Protege Arts Initiative and Margaret Atwood, so it has a certain pedigree. Perhaps Alderman is comparable to Kurt Vonnegut, except more of a realist and less of a humorist or philosopher (though anthropology plays an important role in this novel as well). 

By most measures, The Power is a very fine book with minor flaws and is absolutely worth reading. Others might find it threatening and shrill. And I think that is what separates it from genre fiction-- though we could label it "feminist fantasy." Which also sort of summarizes the book in a crass way, for in this fantasy, women are equipped with the power to fire lightning from their hands. 

While "genre fiction" may not deal in such high-minded themes as "literary fiction," it has experienced something of a renaissance in recent years due to writers that have pushed it beyond the realm of the dime store. Often we hear about Octavia Butler and Ursula Le Guin. I haven't been able to read either yet, but prior to her death in 2018, Le Guin did contribute to The Power in a mentorship capacity. Others clearly shined a light for Alderman's path forward. And so perhaps The Power too, builds on myths and transfigures them onto the modern world, tying up ambition and morality with a feminist bent. 

The novel is firmly-planted, for the most part, in the present-day and the science behind it is as absurd as it is plausible. That is, each woman has a skein. I had to look up the definition of a skein, which is generally, yarn, or a tool for knitting. There is also a female Marvel Comics superhero named Skein who is a member of the Thunderbolts (Hawkeye's Team). Alderman acknowledges Peter Watts for his knowledge of marine biology and the electric eel, for helping her figure out where to place an electro-plaque in the human body. Later, secondary sources indicate that that a cure for nerve gas in the wake of World War II was developed, "Guardian Angel," and it was laced in drinking water across the world, and that the Power has emerged from that mutation in the generations since. Or it is simply an evolutionary adaptation:

"An Israeli anthropologist suggests that the development of this organ in humans is proof positive of the aquatic-ape hypothesis; that we are naked of hair because we came from the oceans, not the jungle, where once we terrified the deeps like the electric eel, the electric ray. Preachers and evangelists grab the news and squeeze it, finding in the sticky entrails the unmistakable signs of the impending end of days. A fistfight breaks out on a popular news discussion program between a scientist who demands that the Electric Girls be investigated surgically and a man of God who believes they are a harbinger of the apocalypse and must not be touched by human hand. There is an argument already about whether this thing was always latent in the human genome and has been reawoken or whether it is a mutation, a terrible deformity." (22)

It takes place around the world in vague locales, apart from Lagos and Moldova. It proceeds as a series of vignettes featuring each character (oh and technically this book is a historical novel by Neil Adam Armon): Roxy, Margot, Allie (Mother Eve) and Tunde. The novel takes place over a 10-year span, from the first discovery of the Power to the Cataclysm (I will avoid spoilers in this review).

Tunde is the male protagonist, and is the aforementioned Lagos native. Basically, he becomes the chief documentarian of the movement, via YouTube. 

Roxy is from England and comes from a crime family. She is very powerful and her mother is murdered in the opening scene. 

Allie is an orphan or foster-child that is placed with an abusive family and begins hearing a voice in her head that establishes her as Mother Eve, and she has healing powers. 

Margot is the mayor of a city (somewhere in New England, we hear at one point) and is ambitious and has two daughters, one of whom is arguably also a main character (Jocelyn). 

It is hard for me to remember some of the early action in this novel (there is Roxy's discovery of her power, hers and Allie's murdering of evil men, the general climate of these unnatural events), but the turning point clearly takes place around page 100, when Moldova first appears as a setting. Before that, Roxy and Allie meet in a convent that Allie has repurposed into a training academy for other girls and they establish themselves as de facto leaders. At one point, one of them learns to start using water as a conduit for the electricity, making them even deadlier. 

In Moldova, Tatiana Moskalev enters the narrative and becomes another major character. The wife of the President, who then dies of a heart attack in his sleep, she is appointed as his replacement. Then Moldova becomes a de facto nation-state of women, changes its name to Bessapara, and declares war against the rest of the world, and nearly all women become cruel and murderous.

And ultimately two of the main characters end up as an item, and there is some experimental surgery with a skein transplant, and Things Have Gone Too Far.  And then there is the twist of the ending, which is cute.

Along the way, there are many pleasures to be found, and for me, the entire book is an allegory on Misogyny. Yes, The Faerie Queene was very hard for me, but I respected the allegorical foundation to it. And yet drawing any serious metaphors or allegory from this narrative would seem to induce mockery: what does the skein represent? why do girls come into their power in teenhood? what about the boys that also have skeins? is it all just a big metaphor for sexual assault, etc.? were society created by women, would it be better than one by men?

Few lessons can be taken out of this work, but I like to think of it as an inquiry into radical feminism. This is informed by my status as a weak male. Thesis: women that hate all men indiscriminately and have no use for them but slavery are unlikely to create a more just and verdant society. Of course, there is the growing certainty that men have subjugated women forever, truly, and still do (even as we pay lip service to their myriad achievements down through history, dedicate a month to them, and an international day, nominate more of them for directing Oscars, apply special status to businesses and organizations led or run by them...), so what if women simply behaved the way men always have? That is one way to look at the novel. And it is just those sorts of "misandrists," that cannot find a single redeemable quality in the human male, that are just as monstrous as the misogynists (or racists, or eugenicists, etc.) responsible for subjugating them in the first place. Of course this is not a popular opinion to convey so I must desist. I believe in passionate protest so I am not going to be contradictory. Of course I also don't like being branded as a monster by dint of gender. It is not that extreme, it is not so bad, it is just the sexual proclivities of men that are monstrous, yes, and the way they only give opportunities to other men like them. Still, saying "reactionary feminism is bad," as a lesson, is sort of meaningless. And really who am I to say this is a lesson of the book? 

Most of these characters are bad. Only two of them are actually, unironically, good-intentioned. But even that is hard to say. I haven't even mentioned the drugs.

At a certain point maybe halfway through the novel, a kind of glitter (actually called Glitter) that the women snort like cocaine, enters the narrative as a commodity and as a weapon. In short, taking Glitter greatly enhances powers, depending on quantity consumed. This does not become the downfall of Bessapara but perhaps of Roxy, whose family seizes on the opportunity to mass produce it and control the supply. 

There are metaphors here that I cannot identify with any kind of certainty. If it's hard for me to select excerpts, its because this is a very active novel, and tends to remain ensconced in its fictional space. If there is anything jarring about the book, it is the cavalier way the news segments are presented, or references to the primary news program:

"You can't be serious, Kristen, is that really what they're saying? I'm afraid it is, Matt. [That maybe one in 10 men will be considered useful.] She puts a gentle hand on his knee. And of course they're not talking about great guys like you, but that is the message of some extremist websites. That's why the NorthStar girls [privately-run military corporation for which Margot sits on the Board] need more authority; we've got to protect ourselves against these people. Matt nods, his face somber. I blame those men's rights people; they're so extreme, they've provoked this kind of response. But now we have to protect ourselves. He breaks into a smile. And after the break, I'll be learning some fun self-defense moves you can practice at home. But first, the weather on the ones." (313)

This news program pops up on one working black-and-white TV in a hospital tent in Bessapara. It seems to be filmed in Margot's hometown, when it appears earlier in the novel. It is not anachronistic necessarily - perhaps it is like the BBC and global - but it is an outwardly satirical element, a "tell" of sorts. And yes, this excerpt does clearly reference contemporary extremists, but more as a winking aside. 

If the purpose of literature is to educate and entertain, The Power is a success. If literature is meant to be useful, however, this is where I tend to flounder with fantasy. Make no mistake: The Power will be showered with accolades when it is made into a limited series by Hulu (after The Handmaid's Tale has run its course). 20 years ago, it could have been made into a summer blockbuster (query whether Hollywood would embrace a female-dominated end-of-the-world epic in the early-00s). Certainly, there is more that is useful in The Power than the Day After Tomorrow, even as the latter is informed by science. The lesson is to fear women, and that for every abuse we inflict upon them as men, we will feel their retribution tenfold, when it comes. Of course that is too much. Maybe the lesson is that all forms of radicalized oppression are absurd, even as they still persist in various governments, cultures, and attitudes. The response to that oppression is something to fear, as righteousness will give way to further oppression. Yet dismantling that oppression is a delicate task, and radical reconstruction is dangerous. I don't think that is the message of the novel, but I am reasonably sure that many believe the better path forward, is slow, incremental progress. Then again I don't think Alderman meant to write a morality tale; rather, an inventive and creative novel that is bemused by real-world misogyny, which offers a scenario where it might make sense, where women constituted an actual threat. The fear that giving more opportunities to women will lead to the downfall of society is completely insane. Unless, they have in their possession, a certain weapon. 

 Grade: B+

Friday, March 5, 2021

Apropos of Nothing - Woody Allen (2020)

Oeuvre rule: this is the first book I have read by Woody Allen (he has several, and the only one I ever browsed was called Without Feathers and, as it appeared to consist of rather spurious comedic bits, I passed) but I am very well familiar with his work. Of his nearly 50 films, it is easier for me to list those I have never seen: Zelig (which features a cameo by a recent subject of ours), Alice, The Curse of the Jade Scorpion, Hollywood Ending, Scoop, Cassandra's Dream, To Rome with Love, Magic in the Moonlight, Cafe Society, and Wonder Wheel. Obviously I have not seen Rifkin's Festival. 

So I have seen about 40 of his films. And though he writes, "How would I sum up my life? Lucky. Many stupid mistakes bailed out by luck. My biggest regret? Only that I've been given millions to make movies, total artistic control, and I never made a great film." (392) Query whether he is being too hard on himself, yet I may agree. Annie Hall, Interiors, Manhattan, Hannah and Her Sisters, Crimes and Misdemeanors, Another WomanHusbands and Wives, Deconstructing HarryMatch Point, Blue Jasmine, and Irrational Man flirt with greatness, and then revert to simply being very good, once they veer in the direction of self-seriousness. Allen seems to chafe at the idea of anyone taking him seriously. 

For all of those "nearly great" films, there are more that are "very good": Sleeper (arguably belongs on the previous list), The Purple Rose of Cairo (ditto), Bullets over Broadway, Mighty Aphrodite, Sweet and Lowdown, Vicky Cristina Barcelona, and Midnight in Paris

And for all the "merely average" ones, many might disagree, as they do something different, they experiment, and sometimes are great for stretches: Bananas, Love and Death, Everything You Always Wanted to Know About Sex....Stardust Memories, September, Shadows and Fog, Everyone Says I Love YouSmall Time Crooks, Anything Else and Whatever Works (middling films that I still found entertaining), and You Will Meet a Tall Dark Stranger (better than expected). 

I recently saw A Rainy Day in New York and there were a couple good scenes but I wouldn't recommend it on the whole. It made me sad that my fellow ex-Gallatin-ite, Timothee Chalamet, regretted working with Allen and donated his entire salary to RAINN. 

Yet the media often runs stories that merely scratch the surface, and in Apropos of Nothing, basically, Woody Allen fights back. It made me feel much better about Chalamet to read this:

"All the three leads in Rainy Day were excellent and a pleasure to work with. Timothee afterward publicly stated he regretted working with me and was giving the money to charity, but he swore to my sister he needed to do that as he was up for an Oscar for Call Me By Your Name, and he and his agent felt he had a better chance of winning if he denounced me, so he did. Anyhow, I didn't regret working with him and I'm not giving any of my money back." (385) 

So maybe that is sort of a spineless move, but image is everything in the industry, and the charged #metoo atmosphere around the Oscars in 2018 felt uncomfortable for everyone in the room. I don't deride Chalamet for this, and it merely shows that there are public and private versions of celebrities, that many publicized stories are calculated poses, and that there might be a chance he could be guarding other aspects of personality that tend to hurt box office, and that perchance we might one day cross paths, and....I kid. This is 2021. Elliot Page also denounced Allen and regretted working with him; Page's bravery in coming out as trans cannot be denied, and openness as to sexuality is not a negative PR move in this day and age.

But, how is the book? Good. It's far from perfect, and Allen does not care about making it perfect. It's extremely casual. There are a number of throwaway lines that less prestigious writers would be forced to remove or edit. It's 392 pages, which is fair for 84 years of life and 50 in the business of filmmaking, and there are no chapters. It reads as one long screed--or rather, about halfway through, it turns into a screed. 

The first half, then, rather bored me much of the time. Allen is very nostalgic for his youth and lingers on early career developments a bit longer--in terms of more minute attention--than his later travails in the film industry. He was precocious. He wrote jokes for professionals while still in high school, and earned more than both his parents, while only working part-time after school. Allen repeatedly acknowledges that he is not an intellectual, nor even very intelligent, but he can pretend well enough to be seen as such. He briefly attended NYU, and his budding career continued to limit his interest in further education. At 16, he bought himself an Olympia Portable typewriter, and has typed everything he has ever written on it since. He met Harlene, a first girlfriend, and they decided to get married. After a few years, they grew apart and realized they had made a mistake. Harlene was a philosophy major at Hunter College:

"Because of her, I have become familiar with some Kant, Kierkegaard, Schopenhauer, and Hegel, and while I can't really say I knew my en soi from my pour soi, I was able to grasp that 'being in a bad marriage' and 'Being in a bad marriage' was not too dissimilar no matter what Heidegger would say." (108)

He met his second wife, Louise Lasser, on a double date with another couple. Shortly thereafter, one day when his wife was at school, he asked if she wanted to go shopping for a jazz record, then another date at the Belmont racetrack, then another date at the MOMA. It was an overlapping relationship and it lasted for eight years (Allen does not detail the technicalities of divorce from his first wife) until they were finally married. 

While none of Allen's films were strictly autobiographical, it was interesting to note some personal details from his life that are sprinkled throughout them. For one, Diane Keaton's original name was Diane Hall. Of course, Diane Keaton is Annie Hall, but others also inspired that character:

"I also played Mister Kelly's in Chicago where I met Judy Henske, during a period Louise and I were on a hiatus from one another. I dated Henske and found her to be bright, funny, and charming. She was from Chippewa Falls, Wisconsin, which I later made Annie Hall's hometown. Judy towered over me and we made a silly-looking couple but it was a treat to spend time with her. The problem was that at that time, no woman I dated had a chance to develop anything serious with me because I loved the mishugana whom I couldn't seem to straighten out, nor could I grasp the seriousness of her illness. What the hell did I know from manic depressives? My uncle Paul saved tinfoil. He peeled it from cigarette packs and rolled it into a larger and larger ball. That was as crazy as I knew." (121)

Grammy Hall is also what Keaton called her grandmother in real life, and the movie. In Rainy Day in New York, Liev Schrieber plays a film director who pays reference to his first wife, who had been a college student in philosophy when they married. Allen has referred to Radio Days as his most autobiographical film, and it is fair to say that all of his films include autobiographical details, or at least references towards personal history.

So now then, Allen reaches the point in his story where he meets Farrow, and while there are fond remembrances and compliments paid towards her, it quickly devolves into an extended harangue on The Accusation. This book is just under 400 pages and I haven't performed a pinpoint accounting, but I would estimate at least 1/4 (if not 1/3) of the text is devoted to The Accusation, and details surrounding it that may have played into it. 

There is a more serious problem with reading this book, and it is the judgment that others may pass on one for reading it. I am never embarrassed to tell people what I am reading, when they ask, but for this I had to supply some sort of explanation. Comparing it to Mein Kampf is both apt and insane. In the popular public imagination, The Accusation is the truth, overwhelmingly. After all, he did marry Soon-Yi, and she is like 40 years younger than him. Say what you will about the impropriety of that marriage, but it would be great to ask anyone that is absolutely positive that he is a pedophile and a child molester if they had heard his side of the story. They might say, no, because I'm sure it's just full of lies. 

This happened recently after the airing of Allen v. Farrow. This is a four-part documentary series currently airing on HBO, which also makes this one of the most timely reviews on Flying Houses. After the first episode, Allen and Soon-Yi made a statement that the documentary was completely one-sided, and that the filmmakers provided little or no opportunity to respond to the allegations within it. This statement was trending on Twitter, and to read the threads is to see 99% of the world 100% convinced that he sexually assaulted his daughter. 

Yet even those in the pro-Mia camp who watch this very one-sided documentary should call it into question. I would not be surprised if the end result is a lessening of the scorn that has been directed towards him. In the 2nd episode, for example, the filmmakers felt it relevant to spend five minutes on a scholar detailing the "unnatural" obsession Allen had with including parts for 16-18-year-old girls in his scrapped screenplays. This is because his archives are at Princeton University, and speaking as a writer (if I may be allowed), it is an extraordinary thing to delve into unpublished work and use random ideas as evidence of predatory obsessions. This is why Kafka wanted all of his work burned. Fortunately, Franz has kept up a good reputation after nearly a hundred years gone.

Woody Allen does not really care about his reputation, so he says. But he does have regrets:

"I regret that I had to devote so much space to the false accusation against me, but the whole situation was grist for the writers' mill and added a fascinating element of drama to a life otherwise pretty routine. To a guy whose high point of the day is his walk on the Upper East Side, a lurid tabloid scandal certainly gets the adrenaline going. I agree with what Francine du Plessix Gray wrote when she interviewed me years ago: 'There are no great Woody Allen stories.'" (389)

Really, there are not that many (I did find it cute that Emma Stone taught him how to text, and that they became texting buddies, until she ghosted him over, allegedly, an unappetizing recipe for soft-boiled eggs---also his stories of meeting Cary Grant and Tennessee Williams were notable). This book is really just an account. It's an Autobiography; it's not a Memoir. Is there a difference that anyone has distinguished? Memoirs are things an author wants to write; autobiographies are things that other people want them to write. That is my distinction. I don't think Woody Allen wanted to write this book, but felt that it had to be done, just as he had to write an op-ed in the New York Times in 2014, reiterating his innocence of a crime against his own child. People will believe what they want to believe, he says, but one must defend themselves, to a degree.

On this score, perhaps we should consider this alongside another autobiography. That one, also, was no classic. That author, also, is totally canceled. That book, too, is overloaded on the back end with legal troubles (child custody for Allen; unpaid royalties to other Smiths for Morrissey; and frankly, it is hilarious that both are still extremely bitter towards the judges in their cases). The difference is, Morrissey got canceled after that book. People still wanted to read it when it came out. It was hotly anticipated, and it was lovingly packaged as an instant classic. It is not a great book (any of the other memoirs referenced in the first paragraph of that review are better than it, as well as this). But it wasn't embarrassing to be seen reading, it was still cool to like him in mid-2016. That is not the case at all here. There is nothing less hip in 2020. 

But is it not fascinating to read that Allen was supposed to have a big part in that yet-unseen Louis C.K. movie?: 

"A crazy question: Is there any humor to be falsely accused of a crime? A sex crime, yet? There was a funny sidebar, and that was the flap with Louis C.K. Louis is a very nice man whom I worked briefly with on Blue Jasmine. I always wanted to do a screen comedy, both of us acting together. With the right script I thought we'd be funny playing off each other. He agreed. We both wracked our brains to come up with an idea. I spent a lot of time to no satisfactory avail. He tried as well, but nothing emerged as the one to work on. Now a few years pass, and he contacts me saying he has a script he wrote and wants me in it; has a great part for me. So I read it and I'm appalled. Not that it was a bad story--it was a good one--but I'd be playing an iconic film director who once either molested a child or was accused of it, and the director has a too close relationship with his daughter." (382) 

I question the usefulness of making this review any longer, but perhaps I could try to excerpt the most damaging statements. It's not easy to find excerpts in this book, arranged as it is. Allen has very few supporters and while I would not necessarily count myself amongst them, I do find it rather surprising that certain details tend to be oddly ignored in the discussion of the case. Without quoting, there's the odd story of Ronan having cosmetic surgery to extend his legs and make him taller, after he graduated law school at a too-young age; another time Mia slapped Moses (who is dead to everyone in the family as the only supporter of Allen) for supposedly taking a tape measure into his bedroom and forced him to apologize to her in front of his siblings, after having him rehearse the apology; there's the unsettling tape that Mia took of Dylan, naked, describing the abuse; the daughter, Tam, who overdosed on sleeping pills in 2000 after a fight with her mother, framed as "accidental" and "heart failure;" Mia neglecting to attend her son Thaddeus's high school graduation, making him wear iron leg braces in public appearances for publicity that she adopted the disabled, locking him in a shed overnight, and appearing shocked when he committed suicide in a car ten minutes from her home in CT, though he had attempted it six or seven years prior--"It is no wonder that two adopted children would be suicides. A third would contemplate it, and one lovely daughter who struggled with being HIV-positive into her thirties was left by Mia to die alone in a hospital on Christmas morning." (234)

There's more but I think that's the most damning of all. This was not a happy family. I cannot say that she sounds like a good mother (though I am sure those still alive say otherwise). I hope that the documentary includes some of these details, to see how Farrow responds to them. It includes excerpts from the audio version of this book, which Allen reads himself. (Apparently this was used without permission but that is hardly its most irresponsible moment.) It would be a seriously dramatic moment to put her on the spot. 

The fact is, she was and still is an excellent actress, and she has had a traumatic history. She married Sinatra at a very young age. Her performance in Rosemary's Baby rightly remains iconic. She was elevated into another echelon by Polanski, before Charles Manson killed his wife. She would later defend him, then decry him (on another note: the "funny story" about Soon-Yi believing that a certain person they have dinner with is Polanski, when he is not, is one of the odder moments in the book). She had a son who later a wrote Pulitzer-Prize winning flagship book for the #metoo movement, burnishing their reputation for uncovering abuse. Her own immediate family supplied even further trauma, which also included famous parents, suicide and molestation. Little or none of this is her fault, yet that reality complicates this narrative a bit more. 

I do not fault her for feeling betrayed and disgusted by Allen, and of course no one can say with total certainty whether or not The Accusation is true or false (except them--you absolutely cannot fault Dylan, whom Allen also claims saw a psychiatrist, prior to the Accusation, for a tendency to confuse fantasy with reality) and really the whole thing makes me want to throw up. 

So I err on the side of judging art on its own, rather than framing it as the work of a monster and obliterating whatever value people had seen in it previously. I don't believe that's totally happened with Allen--many detractors still acknowledge Annie Hall as a fine film--but the overarching idea is that these sorts of people should not be allowed to be successful artists. For one they are old white men (I am conflating Allen and Polanski, which isn't really fair as Polanski acknowledges his guilt) that still enjoyed late career success (Midnight in Paris and The Pianist) and still had financial backers that allowed them to keep making films. They're beyond boomers (what do you call them--the silent generation?) in their late 80's, and they're beyond redemption. That said, I still want to see J'Accuse (and Rifkin's Festival, but to a lesser degree). And I also hope that this documentary will, unintentionally, help make it that Allen does not die remembered only as a pedophile, but as the prolific and legendary comedian, writer, director and artist (I include nothing about jazz in this review, but there is plenty in the book) that he has been for 60 years. But he does not seem to care:

"...You relish the close looks and investigations rather than fear them, because you have nothing to hide. You're eager to take the lie detector test rather than ducking it. It's like sitting at a poker game and holding a royal flush. You can't wait till all the bets are in and the hands are shown. But what if I never get a chance to play my cards? What if I'm gone before I scoop up the chips? Well, as someone who's never had any interest in a legacy, what can I say? I'm eighty-four; my life is almost half over. At my age, I'm playing with house money. Not believing in a hereafter, I really can't see any practical difference if people remember me as a film director or a pedophile or at all. All that I ask is my ashes be scattered close to a pharmacy." (381-382)

And so perhaps neither should we bother ourselves worrying about it.  

Grade: B+

Friday, January 22, 2021

Why We Sleep: Unlocking the Power of Sleep and Dreams - Matthew Walker, PhD (2017)

There are few things I find more disgusting than an employer that expects their employee to sign their entire life over to the enterprise, who respects quantity of hours over quality of work. This is an especially virulent attitude in the legal industry, depending as it does on the billable hour, which is padded and unreasonably inflated to cover the overhead of failing, or deceptive organizations, which most law firms (and corporations generally) are. It is not a good idea to inquire about work-life balance in an interview because the employer will automatically single you out as a lazy worker, a slacker, and eliminate you from the candidate pool.  

I often have such thoughts while thinking about this most recent iteration of the "9-5 experience" and the lack of good jobs open to me, yet what would an employer think--if upon asking a candidate about their hobbies and interests, what they liked to do in their free time--the candidate answered "sleep?" 

They should love that, because many employers think it is reasonable to expect their worker to stay until 9 PM, go home, have something to eat, and go to bed by midnight, get a full 8 hours of sleep, and get back to the office by 9 the next morning. Many people think it is normal to expect to work more than 40 hours a week. Many people will think you are weak if you only want to work 40 hours a week. And okay, I'll admit, 50 hours a week is not totally unreasonable. 60 hours a week, though, should not be the standard, unless one lives (and sleeps) at the office. They should also love that, because a well-rested worker is the best and most efficient type of worker. A worker that is forever living in a sleep deficit will suffer impairments in memory and retention, reaction time, recovery time, and a variety of other bodily issues and functions. But they probably want someone that sleeps as little as they do, that stays in the office until 4 AM trying to finish some very important filing right at the deadline, never mind about their mental and physical health. And they certainly would never encourage napping at work.  

It is just these sorts of misaligned expectations which have made life intolerable for many of us. I cannot tell you how many nights I suffered insomnia that was heightened by the anxiety that comes with needing to be up by 6:00, or 6:30, or 7. My solution was to get zolpidem tartrate (ambien), so I could fall asleep as quickly as possible. After about five or six years of this, I got off it, because eventually, I couldn't sleep without it.

Why We Sleep recognizes the insanity of this situation, and what many other classes of individuals must also face: unrealistic expectations about the number of hours a human being may work healthily. Why We Sleep hones in on this issue near its ending, when discussing required, consecutive shifts by medical residents, generally at 30-hour stretches. Sometimes they are able to sleep, and sometimes they may work 16 hours or more straight. After dissecting an array of research studies, Walker proposes a maximum 12 hour day for medical residents (and one presumes, all workers). While he sometimes comes off as the nutty scientist who just loves sleep and everything about it, no sane person could disagree with his manifold assertions, bolstered as they are by powerful and persuasive evidence. 

And yet that is my only problem with this book. For all of its revelatory observations, validations, discoveries and reflections, I would say approximately 50% of it involves analyses of sleep studies, and of course, 95%+ of them validate the authors' hypotheses. As I passed the halfway point, I began to skim through such sections and paragraphs--no matter how Walker attempts to enliven such dry stretches of scientific writing, the prose is clinical; this may be unavoidable when discussing highly specific and discrete experiments. Apart from that, the book is a total pleasure, and even with the caveat of dreaded "science" in a book of prose, it should be essential reading, particularly for those that say things like "I'll sleep when I'm dead," or "sleep is for the weak," or even "I'm fine on 6 hours of sleep."

The fact is, the less you sleep, the sooner you die. You're more likely to develop cancer, cardiovascular disease, or other illnesses and ailments if you lack sufficient sleep. The longer you sleep, the longer you live. That may sound like a dumb oversimplification, but Walker provides mountains of evidence in support of this fact-- almost too much. While as noted, 50% of the prose is deadened, the other 50% is vibrant, humorous and profound.  

Now then, I came to this book in the autumn of 2019, after seeing a clip of Thom Yorke on a Late Night talk show. He said that he had been reading Why We Sleep, and after hearing just a couple things he said about the book, I decided I had to read it. So I took it out of the library, read through a bit of it, and decided that it was a book to own rather than borrow. So I got it for Christmas, and more than a year later, here we are. That it took me so long to finish should not be construed as a slight. Many other library books demanded my attention, and I read regrettably little during those empty and open days of home quarantine. There is a great deal to love about this book, and the introduction is one of its best parts. Walker acknowledges that much of the material may be dry, and he encourages the reader not to read it in a linear fashion (which I did). Rather, he suggests skipping around to the chapters you might find most interesting. And he ends with another more humorous encouragement:

"In closing, I offer a disclaimer. Should you feel drowsy and fall asleep while reading the book, unlike most authors, I will not be disheartened. Indeed, based on the topic and content of this book, I am actively going to encourage that kind of behavior from you. Knowing what I know about the relationship between sleep and memory, it is the greatest form of flattery for me to know that you, the reader, cannot resist the urge to strengthen and thus remember what I am telling you by falling asleep. So please, feel free to ebb and flow into and out of consciousness during this entire book. I will take absolutely no offense. On the contrary, I would be delighted." (11-12)

In Chapter 4, one of the more fascinating section of the book, Walker surveys the broader array of living organisms and their general sleep practices:

"Without exception, every animal species studied to date sleeps, or engages in something remarkably like it. This includes insects, such as flies, bees, cockroaches, and scorpions; fish, from small perch to the largest sharks; amphibians, such as frogs; and reptiles, such as turtles, Komodo dragons, and chameleons. All have bona fide sleep. Ascend the evolutionary ladder further and we find that all types of birds and mammals sleep: from shrews to parrots, kangaroos, polar bears, bats, and, of course, we humans. Sleep is universal.
Even invertebrates, such as primordial mollusks and echinoderms, and even very primitive worms, enjoy periods of slumber. In these phases, affectionately termed "lethargus," they, like humans, become unresponsive to external stimuli. And just as we fall asleep faster and sleep more soundly when sleep-deprived, so, too, do worms, defined by their degree of insensitivity to prods from experimenters. 
How 'old' does this make sleep? Worms emerged during the Cambrian explosion: at least 500 million years ago. That is, worms (and sleep by association) predate all vertebrate life. This includes dinosaurs, which, by inference, are likely to have slept. Imagine diplodocuses and triceratopses all comfortably settling in for a night of repose!" (56-57)

His passion for the subject matter is palpable, and the message he wants to give to readers everywhere is an urgent one. The negative health effects are easy for people to brush aside, to convince themselves that they are healthy enough if they get six hours of sleep, that they cannot accomplish everything they hope to in a day if they spend 1/3 (or more) of it asleep. Walker anticipates this and warns the reader when he is about to discuss another scary finding about the negative health effects of insufficient sleep. It would be intriguing perhaps to highlight my guess as to the most dire statistic. But there are too many. Likely, the scariest section is on Fatal Familial Insomnia (FFI), which is extremely rare but 100% fatal within 10 months. More often he aims for comic relief: 

"Take a group of lean, healthy young males in their mid-twenties and limit them to five hours of sleep for one week, as a research group did at the University of Chicago. Sample the hormone levels circulating in the blood of these tired participants and you will find a marked drop in testosterone relative to to their own baselines levels of testosterone when fully rested. The size of the hormonal blunting is so large that it effectively "ages" a man by ten to fifteen years in terms of testosterone virility. The experimental results support the finding that men suffering from sleep disorders, especially sleep apnea associated with snoring, have significantly lower levels of testosterone than those of similar age and backgrounds but who do not suffer from a sleep condition. 
Uttering the results of such studies will often quell any vocal (alpha) males that I occasionally come across when giving public lectures. As you may imagine, their ardent, antisleep stance becomes a little wobbly upon receiving such information With a genuine lack of malice, I proceed to inform them that men who report sleeping too little--or having poor-quality sleep--have a 29 percent lower sperm count than those obtaining a full and restful night of sleep, and the sperm themselves have more deformities. I usually conclude my response with a parenthetical low blow, noting that these under-slept men also have significantly smaller testicles than well-rested counterparts." (178-179)

So, sleep is beneficial for virility, cardiovascular health, cancer prevention, weight loss, mental acuity, and creativity. The last is ensconced in the world of dreams, and Walker sets aside Part 3 to discuss How and Why We Dream. Now, dreams have always been the most fascinating element of sleep for me. It was unfortunate that this section did not give me many new answers on the subject. Waking Life has been a favorite film of mine and I recommend that more highly than this if one seeks to delve deeply into dreams. The material here, however, provides a strong corollary to that film, to dispel some of its more fantastical notions, particularly with lucid dreaming. Very few people can do this and the film seems to suggest that anyone can do it if they properly train themselves. I was hoping that this section would provide some form of "how to" for that, but it merely acknowledges and verifies the phenomenon and considers an alternative interpretation:

"There could be no question. Scientists had gained objective, brain-based proof that lucid dreamers can control when and what they dream while they are dreaming. Other studies using similar eye movement communication designs have further shown that individuals can deliberately bring themselves to timed orgasm during lucid dreaming, an outcome that, especially in males, can be objectively verified using physiological measures by (brave) scientists.
It remains unclear whether lucid dreaming is beneficial or detrimental, since well over 80 percent of the general population are not natural lucid dreamers. If gaining voluntary dream control were so useful, surely Mother Nature would have imbued the masses with such a skill. 
However, this argument makes the erroneous assumption that we have stopped evolving. It is possible that lucid dreams represent the next iteration in Homo sapiens' evolution. Will these individuals be preferentially selected for in the future, in part on the basis of this unusual dreaming ability--one that may allow them to turn the creative problem-solving spotlight of dreaming on the waking challenges faced by themselves or the human race, and advantageously harness its power more deliberately?" (233-234)

While I didn't learn everything I hoped to about dreams, the examples of Dmitri Mendeleev and Thomas Edison are quite illuminating. Mendeleev had worked on his Periodic Table for years, and could not crack the proper organizing principle. It finally came to him in a dream, and only in one place did a correction seem necessary. 

He briefly mentions Paul McCartney, and how he wrote "Yesterday" in a dream. After acknowledging that he is from Liverpool and is more partial to the Beatles, he counters with Keith Richards coming up with the melody for "Satisfaction" in a dream. 

Finally, his description of "short sleep" via another invention by Edison, for his own personal use, could perhaps be replicated today, should you desire to try:

"Edison would allegedly position a chair with armrests at the side of his study desk, on top of which he would place a pad of paper and a pen. Then he would take a metal saucepan and turn it upside down, carefully positioning it on the floor directly below the right-side armrest of the chair. If that were not strange enough, he would pick up two or three steel ball bearings in his right hand. Finally, Edison would settle himself down into the chair, right hand supported by the armrest, grasping the ball bearings. Only then would Edison ease back and allow sleep to consume him whole. At the moment he began to dream, his muscle tone would relax and he would release the ball bearings, which would crash upon the metal saucepan below, waking him up. He would then write down all of the creative ideas that were flooding his dreaming mind. Genius, wouldn't you agree?" (232)

Before we come to the close of this review, it is perhaps worth noting that sleep is an underrated performance enhancing drug for athletes. While here he writes about Usain Bolt and Andre Iguodala (then currently of his home team, the Golden State Warriors), I would like to commission a Ted Talk interview between Walker and Justin Verlander, pitcher for the Houston Astros. This article https://www.nytimes.com/2019/07/09/sports/baseball/justin-verlander-all-star-sleep.html is absolutely worth reading for its entertainment value alone, and I recommend the comments as well (particularly the one that says, "this is just a collection of anecdotes"). Verlander routinely sleeps 10 hours a night, and sometimes 11 or 12. Alex Bregman laughed at him until he started following his practice, then developed into an all-star caliber player. The article also includes mention of Tom Brady and Lebron James as heavy sleepers.

If there is anyway to fix our sleep epidemic, we have to set back school times, allow teenagers to sleep later as their circadian rhythms dictate, and remind them that Lebron sleeps 10 hours a night. People want to be like their favorite athlete. What would be better is a round-table discussion with Verlander, Brady and James. Certainly all three are Hall-of-Famers, and two of them flirt with G.O.A.T. rumblings on a daily basis. Verlander has generally been a sturdy player, but last year he suffered a season-long injury on that very late opening day. I am sure that the coronavirus situation altered his training regimen. As noted in the book, sleep is extremely helpful for injury prevention and injury recovery. I would be interested to know why Verlander thinks it happened to him--and more generally, if he read this book, and loved it as much as I would expect. 

Sleep is not a silver bullet cure for everything, but if there is any single takeaway from Walker's research, it is this: sleep is a healthful necessity that we should consider as important as diet and exercise (if not more so). If nothing else, this book should help to dispel the unfair and false generalization that sleep is for the lazy. 









Wednesday, January 6, 2021

Sontag - Benjamin Moser (2019)


I picked up Sontag because I was beginning to do more work on essays, and one essay in particular, "On Criticism," betrayed a glaring blind-spot. In it, I would note that "Sontag looms as an essential voice in the 20th century critical tradition" and that "an essay on literary criticism is inappropriate when one is not deeply-versed in the history of the critic themselves." While I had been referring to myself in the latter statement, it was clear that an essay on the matter should necessarily include Sontag. And I had not read her, and was thus ill-equipped to reference her in such a way. So I remembered hearing about a new biography of her a while back and decided to check it out, before then moving onto her work, because it might help to put that work in better perspective. Sontag accomplishes that, and a great deal more. 

In the tradition of the biographies of Ernie Banks, Raymond Carver, and Justice William O. Douglas, Susan Sontag's gets added to the pantheon of the Best Books list of Flying Houses. At this rate, there should be a sub-category of "Best Biographies," as such a high percentage of them make the list, and as the list becomes crowded with them.  Sontag, however, is singularly great for the same reason that I began to feel it did not quite rise to the level of a Best Book: it was erratic, it was inconsistent, it was repetitive, and it insinuated itself into the psyche of its subject. And ultimately it is this final, imperfect quality which renders it most perfect, and true to its subject matter. For Sontag often wrote about herself rather obtusely. Many of her essays shunned first-person, and she cultivated an air of mystery around her persona. She wrote about herself by writing about her subjects. And so too, Benjamin Moser has done with Sontag, albeit in an objective and nuanced manner. It is only a portrait, and if the work is imperfect, then it also mirrors the imperfections of its subject, who might wince at a great deal of its content. Yet on the whole I think she would find it mostly commendable, even though she abhorred the idea of biographies (and threw water on such efforts), in the sense that it captures her spirit. 

I do think one thing is perhaps lost: Susan Sontag has the last laugh. The possibility is not deeply considered that she had a mordant sense of humor or was playing a massive trick on everyone, or that she was on "the spectrum." No, she was putting on a performance, putting forth the image of "Susan Sontag" that befitted one of the most prominent public intellectuals of her time. And so Sontag itself is an image that recognizes its own absurdity, and subverts that into feeling. While it is unsparing, and many may feel derision for her at times, there is ultimately so much love poured into the crafting of this work that one cannot help but be moved, particularly when one finds so many wonderful tidbits and points of validation. The love is palpable, and if appropriately borne out, the reader gains it for the subject, too. 

The first such example of this occurs around page 50, in which Susan Sontag and two friends travel to the Pacific Palisades to visit Thomas Mann (1550 San Remo Drive). This is something I considered doing in 2008 (I believe it is a writing retreat/foundation now), so I found this very exciting:

"The encounter was so momentous for Susan that she immediately started to write about it. The effort would not culminate for nearly forty years, when, in 1987, she published 'Pilgrimage,' a story about her adolescent encounter with the elderly 'god in exile,' winner of the Nobel Prize, preeminent symbol  of the dignity of German culture. 'Pilgrimage' has come to stand for the whole precocious childhood of Susan Sontag, the girl from the provinces who, by dint of her admiration for her illustrious predecessors, eventually catapulted herself into their ranks. It is one of the few memoirs she wrote. Because it reveals an insecurity few suspected lurked behind the figure of Susan Sontag--by 1987, hardly less intimidating than Thomas Mann himself--it became one of her best-known pieces of writing." (68-69)

She was somewhat disappointed by Mann, and noted that his comments on The Magic Mountain "betray his book with their banality." Before we depart from this subject, a brief note on what is also the inaugural review of Flying Houses:

"In the story, they also discuss his forthcoming Doctor Faustus. The novel is filled with the German dialect of the sixteenth century, Mann explains, and he fears it will not be readily understood by an American public. And in fact they did talk about the book, but not in this way, since the book appeared in English in 1948. By setting the meeting in 1947, though, Susan can anticipate a discussion of this work. 'Ten months later, later, within days of the appearance' of the book, she and Merrill were at the Pickwick Bookstore: 'I bought mine and Merrill his.'
Another diary entry, in a long list of childhood memories, tells another story.
'Being caught at the Pickwick Bookstore for stealing Doctor Faustus.' (72)

And so it was, sixty years later, that I bought mine from Nantucket Bookworks, and later began this new venture of critical inquiry, which has led to discoveries like these. Some friends went to go to stalk J.D. Salinger or Kurt Vonnegut in the early 2000's. Had I better sense at the time, I might have stalked Susan Sontag. For we did, briefly, share a geographical center and interwoven community of philosophic thought. Sontag emerged at the fringes of many of my courses, yet stopped just short of the syllabus. In one particular course, which included Camera Lucida (Barthes), This is not a Pipe (Foucault) and Society of the Spectacle (Debord), On Photography certainly would have been appropriate (perhaps our professor felt one text on the captured image was enough). In another course, we read The Origins of Totalitarianism (Arendt), One-Dimensional Man (Marcuse) and On Tyranny (Strauss). Sontag admired and looked up to Arendt, briefly housed Marcuse as he grieved for his late wife, and studied at the University of Chicago during Strauss's tenure. In a course on theater, we studied Artaud and Becket and Robert Wilson, each of whom also show up in Sontag. I did not read Derrida but he did teach at my school:

"But Sontag did not like these postmodern writers, and almost never referred to them by name. Instead, she expressed disapprobation of 'what's called postmodernism,' which she defined as 'making everything equivalent.' ... It was one thing to expand standards to incorporate art excluded by historical injustice, as the feminist and black movements tried to do. It was something else to suggest that all works were equivalent. This was an implication of Sontag's sixties provocations: 'It's very tiny--very tiny, content,' she quoted De Kooning's saying in 'Against Interpretation.' These could seem to convince herself to experience art sensually, like Irene [Fornes] or Paul [Thek]. She never actually believed that content did not exist: like many modernists, including Wittgenstein, she was interested in the philosophical shift from examining what things mean--the classical task of criticism--to examining how they come to mean it. But this idea, popularized, risked suggesting that meaning was a mere construction, and that language, literature, and art were no more than the sum of the biases of a dominant group. Far more than Marxism or Freudianism, postmodernism was the 'revenge of the intellect upon art' of which she had warned in 'Against Interpretation.' (425-426)

So no, I did not read Sontag in college, and this gap muddled my education, and deprived me of the intellectual grounding that I sought during the preparation of my colloquium, which was on politics and writing. 

Now Sontag's political writing is routinely criticized in this volume, and it seems clear that Moser greatly prefers her thoughts on art over war, but if I had even been aware of her Three Paragraph 9/11 Takedown, it might have enriched the way I thought about the War on Terror, and refined the perspective that I took in that colloquium. I will not reprint it here (I am reprinting enough) but I highly recommend checking it out for its sheer audacity, particularly if one lived in New York City at the time, and can clearly recall that atmosphere. 

My whole way of thinking about literature, in fact, might have been altered by reading Sontag sooner. What is Flying Houses, after all, but "against interpretation?" What are all of the problems that I have had with literary theory, and my inability to thrust myself into that mode of academia? Sontag subsumes it all, and I lament that I did not come to her sooner. It is tremendously difficult to study literature without a sympathetic guide; in the early 2000's, she may have been the best. (Though Harold Bloom also taught at my school at the same time, I did not find his method of analysis nearly as inspirational.)

Thus, as to a first point, Sontag is excellent at fleshing out some of the most complex philosophical thought of the era, which I would argue has not greatly advanced. We studied many of the same ideas in college, and where my professors may have failed to bring me towards a more comprehensive understanding of them, this book succeeds, at least in providing a robust introduction to such. Intellectually, it is peerless. Yet if one also has a certain appetite for gossip, it provides no shortage of such, either.

The book opens with a scene from a movie that Susan's mother, Mildred, filmed in January of 1919-- Auction of Souls, or Ravished Armenia. Mildred, born in March 1906 (along with my grandmother), is analyzed numerous times in this book as the most important figure in Susan's life, and their ongoing love-hate relationship serves as a metaphorical foundation to the other tumultuous relationships in her life. Mildred is alcoholic, she puts on a very pretty face for her friends and society, but privately at home Susan and her younger sister Judith see that facade fall away. She also, amusingly, does not like to be told the truth:

"Rather than seeing this as lying, Mildred saw omitting details as courtesy, tact: a consideration she extended to others and expected them to extend to her. 'Lie to me, I'm weak,' Susan imagined her saying. She was, she insisted, too fragile for the truth, and believed that 'honesty equaled cruelty.' Once, when Susan attacked Judith for speaking honestly to her mother, Mildred seconded the reproach: 'Exactly,' she said." (25)

Her husband, Jack Rosenblatt, Susan's father, died in the late 30's (in his own late 30's), and Mildred later remarried Nathan Sontag, whose surname was adopted for its alliterative and mellifluous quality. Mildred exists throughout the narrative as a kind of innocuous villain--she may have held Susan back in certain regards, but it was no mistake that Susan turned into the icon she became, obsessed as she was with appearances, facades and masks, at least in part due to Mildred's influence. She also became obsessed by the trope of the "fake death," as she was told for many years that her father was not dead, but simply away. 

Susan's youth is difficult to pin down, as the family moved rapidly through vastly different landscapes. She was born in New York City in January 1933, and several months later her family moved to Long Island. In 1939, they briefly moved to Miami, FL before going back to New York in Forest Hills, Queens. In 1943, they moved to Tuscon, AZ, in an ongoing quest to find a climate-cure for the asthma Susan suffered from in her youth. In 1946, they moved to Los Angeles. which Mildred had left 25 years earlier. Susan attended high school at North Hollywood High, and somehow graduated in 1948 at 15. She wanted to go to the University of Chicago, but instead she had to compromise between UCLA and UC-Berkeley. She chose Berkeley, and there she met Harriet Sohmers, her first "companion," who used a great pick-up line on her: "Have you read Nightwood?" (84) Harriet, who had transferred after spending time at NYU and Black Mountain College, introduced her to the gay subculture of San Francisco and led to an embrace of her sexuality. She also created a one page document that itemized every sexual encounter she had between the ages of 14 and 17:

"The list is noteworthy for several reasons. The first is the sheer quantity of people she had managed to sleep with by her second year in college: thirty-six. The second is the number of one-night stands, people with single names, from Yvonne to 'Phil' to the alarming 'Grandma.' But the most remarkable aspect of this list is the pedagogical mind-set its title reveals. 'The Bi's Progress' shows that Susan had taken Gene's advice and was trying to train herself into heterosexuality by increasing the proportion of heterosexual encounters. Perhaps she could master heterosexuality as she mastered vocabulary words: by dint of practice." (90)

In 1950, she transferred to the University of Chicago and took a class from a young professor, Philip Rieff. Rieff would become her husband, and two years later, she would give birth to David, at age 19. David becomes another major figure in the narrative at this point, as Moser begins to paint a picture of a kind of forced-precociousness. Susan regards David not only as her son, but as a brother of sorts, and even a parent (he later became her editor at Farrar, Straus and Giroux). He "sleeps on piles of coats" at parties and she reads him Candide as a bedtime story. By contrast, Rieff is a rather incidental figure, and mostly notable for writing a book on Sigmund Freud, The Mind of the Moralist, largely (entirely?) ghostwritten by Susan in her early 20's. He refused to acknowledge this until many years later. I have not read Middlemarch but at one point Susan reflects on that novel and realizes that, "not only was [she] Dorothea, [she] had married Mr. Causabon." (116) (I might only get a reference to Mr. Rochester; Middlemarch is another glaring blind-spot.)

After Rieff's teaching stints at University of Wisconsin and Brandeis University, Susan and David moved with him to Cambridge, and Susan began graduate coursework in English at the University of Connecticut. At 20, she was the "youngest college instructor in the United States." (134). A year or two later, she transferred to Harvard. It is also around this time that she got to know Jacob and Susan Taubes, another professor and his wife, who would prove very influential in the wake of her divorce. Later, Susan sleeps with Jacob, and his wife does not seem to care and remains a close friend (they were morally adventurous, though they later separated and divorced; Susan Taubes committed suicide in 1969, four days after her novel Divorcing was savaged by The New York Times--so yes, some critics do have blood on their hands, but that is another essay for another time...). She then applied to St. Anne's, one of the women's colleges at Oxford, to continue her studies. This is where Part I of the book ends, after 150 pages.

Part II, then, opens in Oxford and Susan finds it rather boring and so she moves to Paris where she meets Annette Michelson, who then introduces her to Sartre and de Beauvoir. This is also where sadomasochism captures her interest, which Moser extrapolates into her view of relationships, which incorporated a Master-Slave dynamic that played out in many, if not all of them. After Paris, she returns to San Francisco, where she hands Philip a letter formalizing their break-up:

"I don't want to be married, at least not on the terms I (and you) have understood marriage. I hate the exclusiveness, the possessiveness of marriage--each couple stewing in its own privacy, guarding its interests against the world...Perhaps if I (I mean, we) had understood marriage different from the start...Perhaps if I (we) weren't so romantic, so in love with the idea of love. Adultery, civilized arrangements, marriages of convenience or comradeship--these happen, and work, all the time. But they're not for you and me, are they? Timid, easily bruised, sentimental as we are..." (168)

She read Patricia Highsmith's novel The Price of Salt and worried that Philip would use evidence of her bisexuality as a moralistic pose to secure custody of David. Philip's mental state deteriorated as the divorce became a reality, and perhaps because of that--his craziness outweighed hers--David went with her to New York. It is here that Susan meets the Cuban-American artist Irene Fornes, who was the ex of her own ex, Harriet, who actually moved to New York to be with Susan. Susan threw a homecoming party for her, and met Irene that night. Harriet left for Florida, and Susan began the affair; upon her return, Susan carried it on, and ultimately Irene called Harriet to tell her to move out, because that is what Susan wanted. Harriet complied. In 1959, "happenings," a new medium of performance art, began to pop up. Susan also began work on her first novel, The Benefactor

I see this review is turning into a makeshift biography, a distillation of the information in Sontag. If the purpose of criticism is to imbue art with meaning, simply reciting the plot points of a book does little justice to it. Suffice to say, Part II concerns the emergence of Susan Sontag, public intellectual, essayist and amateur novelist. 

It seems clear that Moser would rank Sontag's novels in the following order: 
(1) The Volcano Lover 
(2) In America
(3) The Benefactor 
(4) Death Kit

He routinely criticizes her longer fiction, and perhaps rightly so, but of course I can't really tell you if he is wrong, only that her first two novels do sound rather theoretical, allegorical, absurdist, existential, outre and ripe for misinterpretation. She also writes "Notes on Camp," and it is given its rightful share of space as befits a breakout piece of its notoriety. Owing to the statements above, it is inappropriate for me to summarize the gravamen of her essays; I will only make a pledge to read Against Interpretation as an introduction to her oeuvre, and formulate such ideas later.

Part II ends in the late 1970's, as Susan deals with her first cancer diagnosis (breast cancer), having ascended to the ranks of the literati "Family" of the Partisan Review and The New York Review of Books and Farrar, Straus and Giroux (Roger Straus instrumental in securing her contracts to write books), having written a controversial essay about Vietnam after traveling to Hanoi, having gone to Sweden on government invitation to make an experimental film (Duet for Cannibals), and then another (Brother Carl), having become involved with Carlotta del Pezzo, Duchess of Caianello, "a Neapolitan aristocrat whose only concern was being," who was "notably indolent even by the standards of her milieu": 

"'Carlotta might not even get out of bed,' Cavalli explained. 'It was impossible to make any plans with her.' In 1970, their friend Giovannella Zannoni explained this to Susan: 'She gets at times very vague about time and its meaning and seems totally incapable of understanding that other people may take dates and make appointments as something precise.' Cavalli added: 'I don't think she ever read a book in her life.' And she only ever made two things in her life, said Don Levine: 'her fat dark brown paper joints, which she rolled every morning, and her very spicy pasta sauce for breakfast." (338)

She had also gotten involved with the French actress Nicole Stephane, who helped her recover from this bout with cancer, and flew her on the Concorde to New York for her first public speech post-recovery, at Bobst Library, where she was regarded as one that had come back from the dead. 

Moser mentions at several points that this first bout with cancer intensified Sontag's passion for life, made her cherish her days and attempt to cram 48 hours into 24. She rarely slept, and when someone accused her of napping, she would insist that had not been the case--even after they had actually seen her asleep, and informed her of such. 

A brief digression: I happened to read a chapter of Why We Sleep today, which persuasively and scientifically argues that cancer is more likely to arise in adults that sleep too little. More generally, the less you sleep, the earlier you die. I do believe that Sontag is, perhaps, the greatest (worst?) example of this unfortunate result. She died at 71. She was about two months older than Ruth Bader Ginsburg. I am unaware of what Ginsburg's sleeping habits were, but I believe they were also similarly short (4-6 hours). She beat cancer numerous times; perhaps she lived so much longer because the rest of her lifestyle was healthier than Susan's (lifelong smoker). In any case, what Ginsburg is to attorneys (a heroine), Sontag is to writers. 

Part III then, catalogs the prime of her life, opening as it does with the publication of On Photography. In here, her rift with Leni Riefenstahl is mentioned, and this is the only point of reference I had, from watching The Wonderful Horrible Life of Leni Riefenstahl 15 years ago, and hearing an interview during that film when Riefenstahl is asked some particular question and shakes her head and says, "Oh that Susan Sontag thing...." I wondered what it was she wrote, and it appears that it is basically a take-down essay, which appeared in her book Under the Sign of Saturn. So that mystery at least, is apparently solved.

She also took down Adrienne Rich, who wrote a letter criticizing Sontag's essay on Riefensthal, and made some very provocative statements about modern feminism:

"Sontag's furious response suggested that Rich had touched a nerve. She accused Rich of resorting to 'the infantile leftism of the 1960's' that verged into 'sheer demagogy' from 'that wing of feminism that promotes the rancid and dangerous antithesis between mind ("intellectual exercise") and emotion ("felt reality").' This was of thinking was 'one of the roots of fascism.' Rich, an intellectual of the first rank, was subjected to the charge of of illustrating 'a persistent indiscretion of feminist rhetoric: anti-intellectualism.' Sontag's attack on Rich alienated many feminists, who would never consider her one of their own: a breach that may explain why Sontag's own feminist writing were mothballed." (397)

Moser clearly feels that Sontag was wrong on this score, but I wonder how much application it might have in today's world, when so much feminist rhetoric shows up on Twitter in bite-sized morsels of rage. Such "anti-feminist" attitudes are no longer in accord with contemporary culture. J.K. Rowling is cancelled and called a TERF for the suggestion that children may be confused about their sexuality, or gender; or for a foolish retweet, or "like," that is interpreted as monstrous. Camille Paglia has taken a somewhat similar pose to Sontag of late. Indeed, she shows up at a couple points in this book, and tried to start a rivalry with Sontag on Page 6 of the Times. Sontag brushed her off and swiftly denounced her. While Paglia is still one of the more redoubtable intellectuals in the public sphere, her influence pales in comparison due to her more "problematic" recent writings. Perhaps Susan Sontag would be cancelled today (perhaps she already is); I have to believe she would embrace it.

In one interview with Moser, he mentioned that he had to leave out 90% of the material he compiled, and so it is with this review, I will need to leave out 90% of my thoughts on this book, I will not be able to excerpt everything that amused me, I will need to paraphrase faster, and reflect more generally on the work as a whole. Yet I cannot move onto Part IV without mentioning Annie Leibowitz. 

Part III is the best part of the book. I'll just put that out there and say it was the case for me. "This Susan Sontag Thing" and "Taking Hostages," back-to-back chapters, comprise the best 40 pages of the book. They largely center around the AIDS crisis and what Susan did (or didn't do) from her lofty perch. But it was not a lofty perch. After a fire in 1985, Sontag slept only covered by a tarp while her roof was repaired, because she did not have the money for a hotel. She met Annie in 1989 when she needed a photographer for the publication of AIDS and Its Metaphors. Annie had a reputation for bringing out "casual intimacy" in her subjects, sometimes after sleeping with them. This was no different with Susan, and as they fell in love with different parts of one another, and their relationship became more obvious, Susan deflected, only wanted Annie to be known as a "friend," and abhorred the idea of being labeled a lesbian.  

From here, Moser goes into an extended take-down of AIDS and Its Metaphors ("for a movement that had moved far beyond polite critique, the book was most remarkable for its irrelevance.") (521) and Sontag's form of "activism" during the AIDS crisis. For me, at least, this is one of the most compelling moments of the book, because it juxtaposes her bisexuality in private with her public image, and calls her out for lacking the courage to "come out." But that would be a crass simplification, as Moser generally remains empathetic to his subject.

There is much less empathy in the discussion of her relationship with Annie. Quite frankly, Sontag comes off worse than she does at any other moment in the book during these scenes. Now then, I too am wary of labels, and do not like using the term "toxic" unless it applies to a chemical compound. Relationships are generally difficult, and the Master-Slave dynamic does play out in certain facets of life for everyone, but I do think Susan's apparent lack of gratitude for Annie's generosity is disgraceful, akin to the child of fabulously wealthy parents that takes the largess and privileges bestowed on them for granted, and becomes a worse person because of it. I do find it amusing when Susan is so casually cruel to Annie, but it seems clear that Annie did not feel that way, and it is heartbreaking to consider how she felt after she had given so much:

"And Annie was not only supporting Susan. Directly but more often indirectly, she was supporting everyone around Susan. She paid all of Susan's assistants. And through Susan, quite a lot Annie's money found its way to David, 'down to buying Susan's Christmas present to him of Navajo bracelets every year.' Annie supported Nicole, impoverished following the death of her spendthrift father in 1984: 'I would just call Annie and say 'Nicole needs some money,' and she would send it,' Carla said. One duty of Susan's next assistant, Greg Chandler, was depositing Annie's checks. After the MacArthur ran out, these amounted to fifteen thousand dollars per week. Their accountant estimated that over the course of their relationship Annie gave Susan at least eight million dollars." (526-527)

Even so, it is not entirely true that Susan became a worse person after obtaining the trappings of wealth via Annie. Had that been the case, her work in Serbia, several years later, would never have been done. And that is where Sontag goes in Part IV: Sarajevo, where Sontag famously staged Waiting for Godot in 1993. The opening of this final part, which delves into the history of Yugoslavia and Croatia, is perhaps more difficult and confusing than anything in Parts I or II, discussing the philosophical precepts of her work and those of her predecessors. Moser understands this, and while he seems to admire Sontag greatly for her work there, it is contrasted with her trip to Hanoi (and her essay on the matter), which he criticizes at multiple points. Generally, she is not good on politics, she took a rather superficial view of Vietnam, and she didn't do enough for AIDS activism, but here, finally, she finds redemption. 

I am sure many people, myself included, have somewhat vague memories of that period. I do remember Zlata's Diary, which many of my classmates read in 5th or 6th grade. I do remember Slobodan Milosevic, and the genocide of the Albanians, and the war in Kosovo. As to the details, I have zero practical knowledge. Moser at least attempts to help:

"The largest ethnic group was the Serbs, for example, who were often coextensive with--but nonetheless distinct from--the Serbians, who are the citizens of Serbia, not all of whom are Serbs: they could be Albanians, Hungarians, Jews, or even Chinese. Serbs, in contrast, are an ethnic group of Eastern Orthodox Christians who may be found anywhere from Moscow to Miami; and there were furthermore Bosnian Serbs, Kosovo Serbs, and Croatian Serbs--by no means to be confused with the Serbian Croats--all of whom had their own histories, though all spoke the same language, which was generally known as Serbo-Croatian, but which was also, depending on the place, called Serbian, Croatian, Bosnian, Montenegrin, or simply, with a shrug, 'our language.'"

So basically the situation there was like a powder keg, a hornet's nest, or a clusterf***. The Siege on Sarajevo lasted 1,425 days. People outside cared, but not really that much. The United Nations could have ended the fracas in a matter of days, yet they avoided intervention until the situation became untenable. Susan Sontag did not initiate American intervention in Sarajevo, but she was one of the very few that traveled to the region, on numerous occasions, and took a personal interest in the people and its culture and the forces bearing down upon them. She did not escape every night to her fancy hotel room, she dug into the trenches with her theater troupe. Unlike with the AIDS crisis, her activism was strident and and aggressive. She denounced all of her fellow artists that did nothing. Even Salman Rushdie, whom she had been instrumental in helping protect after the fatwa was issued upon him, remarked that there were "two Susans"--one of which could be "brilliant and funny and loyal and rather grand," while the other would be a "bullying monster." (590) It seems that near the end of her life, many of her friends abandoned her. Many of them still "loved" her, they just did not "like" the way she had become.

Part IV also details some the writing and reception of In America, which won the National Book Award for Fiction in 1999. Moser does not seem to like it as much as The Volcano Lover, but acknowledges it as a decent book that probably could have been better.  Apart from that, the major narrative of Part IV is the recurrence of her cancer, and the efforts she took to fight it, including a very dangerous bone marrow transplant procedure. In contrast to many people in the final stages of life, when they are on their deathbed, Susan continued weighing experimental treatment options and never finally "gave in" or "resolved" to let herself die. 

That is an appropriate ending to this story about a woman that never had enough time to read and write everything she wanted. Of course, she left her mark on this world, but from this biography it appears that Susan Sontag the person left more of a mark than Susan Sontag's collected writings. Perhaps it was like this in the 1970s and 1980s, when writers, like Kurt Vonnegut for example, could be fabulously well-to-do, get written up in Page Six, and appear in cameos in movies (Sontag has a brief scene in Zelig, which I should watch whenever I am able to move onto reviewing Apropos of Nothing). People cared about what she thought, and what she had to say. She wrote about a "diva" in her final novel, and she ultimately was one, in her own way. If anyone has serious designs on being a writer, it would behoove them to read this book. It opened me up to her world in a way I don't think anything else could have, as she wrote about herself obtusely and engaged in personal mythology. She is one of the great inspirational artists of the latter half of the 20th century, and Moser has captured (nearly?) everything essential about her in this volume. In one interview, he said he did not know what he wanted to do next, already having done two biographies. If he does nothing else, at least there is this (it did win the Pulitzer Prize). Sontag dreamed of winning the Nobel Prize, like Thomas Mann, but J.M. Coetzee won it in 2003, and her hopes were dashed. She may not have been as acclaimed as she felt she deserved, and she may not have wanted biographies written about her, but she will be remembered, and more people will come to her work, largely now because of the work Moser has done. A fantastic movie could be made from it. For all the inspiration Sontag personally conjured over the course of her life, this book will do the same for everyone that never got the opportunity to meet her, or live in her time.

Grade: A 

Thursday, November 12, 2020

Weather - Jenny Offill (2020)


Weather is Jenny Offill's third novel. I have not read Last Things but now I must complete the oeuvre, to this point. She has also written a few children's books and co-edited a couple anthologies. She broke out with Dept. of Speculation, which is a triumph of the form, and was reviewed here just three months ago. It took six years for me to find it, and it cut me deep. So I put a hold on Weather at the library immediately thereafter. It is difficult to say which book is better. Opinions may vary. It is not going to be easy for me to explain why, but I will admit a slight preference to Dept. of Speculation. I recommend either book to everyone. And it makes sense to read them in chronological order. It is worth noting, however, that Weather is the slightly more difficult read. There is a larger cast of characters, who actually have names, and the book is slightly longer. It is written in the same style, but the "tiny episodes" stretch out further, and there are six chapters or parts to the novel. There is also a deeper theme with implications for the whole of humanity.

That theme is climate change and environmental chaos. Dept. of Speculation is about a smaller domestic situation that should ring true for anyone that has ever had second thoughts about a serious relationship. Weather does tell a relatively straightforward story about a domestic situation as well. The difference is the backdrop. Both narrators have many similarities, and both experience a kind of spiraling out of their psyche. If the former is about how one moves forward after a trying time, this is about how one protects a child that will enter the prime of their life in 2047. And doomsday prepping.

As far as a plot, like DOS, it is minimal. At first blush, this is quite a different book, however. It is a first-person narrative, whereas DOS is third person. Lizzie is mother to Eli, wife to Ben, and sister to Henry. Eli is somewhere around first grade. Henry is a younger brother struggling with substance abuse issues, who moves in to stay with Lizzie and her family at the beginning. Lizzie works at a university library, Ben works as a programmer of educational video games from home, and Henry begins a job writing greeting cards. He finds this through Catherine, a woman who is also in recovery. About 50 pages into the novel, he moves in with her, and around page 100, they have a baby (Iris) and quickly get married. Later some of Henry's addiction issues resurface, and he moves back in, while juggling divorce and co-parenting. Lizzie also works for Sylvia, her professor from grad school, reading and responding to all of the letters from listeners to her podcast on climate change (Hell or High Water). And there are even more minor characters (Lizzie's mother, her driver from a car service, the owner of her local bodega, her meditation teacher, two neighbors, another parent at Eli's school and her daughter, a co-worker, a friend, a couple of dudes). 

It may be useful to consider exactly why there are six chapters, because there are none in DOS, there are only asterisks to separate each section of blocks of text. The asterisks are again used to close out each of the hundred or so "tiny episodes." The chapters may just signal that there is more "action" in this narrative. 

Chapter 1 is 64 pages long and ends at the beginning of summer (2016?), just as Lizzie has her birthday and becomes "officially middle-aged." Chapter 2 is 37 pages long and ends as the new school year begins, Iris's birth is imminent, and Lizzie's mother comes into town for it. Chapter 3 is 28 pages long and clearly begins in November.

Allow me a brief aside from this text-gloss to express my amazement that, on the morning of the 2016 election, I happened to read a section of Americanah that reflected warmly on the 2008 election. And again, on the morning of the 2020 election, I happened to read a section of this book, dreadfully reminiscing about the 2016 election:

"And in the ether, people asking the same question again and again. To the yours-to-losers, to the both-the-samers, to the wreck-it-allers.

Happy now?

The path is getting...narrower. That's how Ben told me. He was doing the math in his head. 

But it could still...?

It's not impossible. 

And so we stayed up and watched until the end." (111)

Chapter 4 is 50 pages and is the turning point of the novel. I have already spoiled enough above. This is when the theme begins to overtake the narrative, as Lizzie drifts away from domestic concerns while Ben and Eli leave to take a "glamping" road trip with Ben's sister to California. She becomes increasingly obsessed with doomsday as she meets a new friend and is educated in survivalism while her family is away. This chapter is basically about that relationship.

Chapter 5 is 5 pages long. Eli and Ben return home, and there is a short reflection on the events in Chapter 4. 

Chapter 6 is 8 pages long and the book ends perfectly. It has a better ending than DOS, and DOS has a very good ending as well. There is an obligatory note of hope at the end that serves as a supplement to the text and transforms the narrative. 

Like DOS, the writing is simple and pithy. There is just a lot more going on in this novel, and it does not cohere as beautifully as DOS. It is cohesive, make no mistake, but it would seem almost wrong, in a way, if Offill wrote an ending that wrapped everything up in a neat package. Notes of uncertainty are present in each ending, but there is deeper uncertainty in this one, owing to the thematic element. Perhaps this exchange highlights that horror: 

"Somehow, I get seated halfway down the table from her [Sylvia]. I'm trapped next to this young techno-optimist guy. He explains that current technology will no longer seem strange when the generation who didn't grow up with it finally ages out of the conversation. Dies, I think he means.

His point is that eventually all those who are unnerved by what is falling away will be gone, and after that, there won't be any more talk of what has been lost, only of what has been gained. 

But wait, that sounds bad to me. Doesn't that mean if we end up somewhere we don't want to be, we can't retrace our steps? 

He ignores this, blurs right past me to list all the ways he and his kind have changed the world and will change the world. He tells me that smart houses are coming, that soon everything in our lives will be hooked up to the internet of things, blah, blah, blah, and we will be connected through social media to every other person in the world. He asks me what my favored platforms are.

I explain that I don't use any of them because they make me feel too squirrelly. Or not exactly squirrelly, more like a rat who can't stop pushing a lever. 

Pellet of affection! Pellet of rage! Please, please, my pretty!

He looks at me and I can see him calculating all the large and small ways I am trying to prevent the future. 'Well, good luck with that, I guess,' he says." (38-39)

Later, there is a scene with Lizzie and Ben in bed, paying reference to a certain website where they can enter Eli's birth year and watch numbers go up, and up. Then later still:

"I had that thought again. The one with numbers in it. It bent the light.

Eli is at the kitchen table, trying all his markers one by one to see which will still work. Ben brings him a bowl of water so he can dip them in to test. According to the current trajectory, New York City will begin to experience dramatic, life-altering temperatures by 2047." (106)

In a certain way, this novel is more about the notion of dread as it relates to climate change, rather than climate change itself. Published as it was in February 2020, its timing could not possibly be more prescient. This is not about a pandemic, but the pandemic brought the entire world together in a way that climate change also should. Human beings will not outlast the depletion of natural resources on our planet, try as others might to establish colonies on Mars (briefly referenced in the novel), but if they are to live as long and as well as possible, they must band together to fight a common enemy. It is difficult because with climate change, that enemy is ourselves, and the wasteful practices that we have been conditioned to believe are normal and necessary. Only after a cataclysmic event do we realize the value of appropriate precautions.

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So too with the past 8 months in this world. We have experienced an economic disaster due to a prolonged period of patchwork emergency measures, phasing in and out, stressing the overwhelming necessity of bringing people back to work, suggesting we not go out and do things, but still allowing us to do so, presuming we will take appropriate precautions. So many people have gotten tired of hearing about how awful it is that they just stop caring, whether it be social distancing or climate change. We can affect positive change in both by taking ourselves out of the equation, reducing our carbon footprint to zero and sitting alone in a room away from airborne pathogens. After years, and years, I am continually amazed by the cavalier attitude so many people have towards recycling. And I get it, a society that recycles perfectly will not stop climate change on that basis alone. There may be no way to stop climate change (just as possibly, the virus will continue to mutate) and in the face of that uncertainty and despair, so many people give up or stop caring. 

People say, "I don't want my grandchildren to be brought into a dying planet." Think of your children, and your children's children, people say--never mind whether you actually have them. Some of us may scoff at the phrase, and yet family has a way of increasing the stakes.  You have to fight to hold onto those you love, and those you have pledged to love and prepare for this twisted 21st century life. You have to think of your family, and do what you can to keep them safe. It is hard to see so many isolated, unconnected individuals as family, particularly when the division in this country instills the notion that "the other" has no rational basis for their beliefs, that they don't deserve to live, anyways. 

Offill doesn't write explicitly about such matters but this book shows how people really are, how self-interested and distracted and unconcerned they are for those outside of their bubble. It hints that agreement as to a sort of shared humanity will be necessary before we can implement solutions to rehabilitate our ravaged earth. Weather is back at the library now, but I expect to return to obligatorynoteofhope.com as a reminder that there are still good people in the world, and that we can choose to be like them if we are brave enough.

Grade: A-